Happiness perhaps once had features
Of a single, compact whole,
But countless are the craving creatures
Praying God some bliss to dole.
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Great mantra of happiness which carries and spreads love, goodwill and joy wherever you go. This is an amazing write. Thanks for sharing, Madam Dr Tulsi. I quote: Give your neighbour just a half And see your pleasure growig double:
very nice poem-peace and piety is from heaven - we must preserve it
Fabulous composition about Happiness, meaningful piece written in perfect end rhymes........
A Profound and practical philosophy of Happiness. Very well written.
it's a marvelous poem, dr.. i'm sort of reading Aunty Emily's work or Kipling's.. very beautiful, indeed..
Madam, Your poem in classical mould reminds me so many poems of Great Gurazada Apparao gari 'desamunu preminchumanna'. Reading your poems is like learning lessons in poetry. You are wonderful. Let me add an old saying: 'Happiness is never perfect unless it is shared' regards, sathya narayana
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An awesome poem..a very inspirational piece, great write with wisdom.
'A particle here, a particle there, To your happy lot may fall; Not any time, not anywhere, can you ever find them all'... wisdom lines...lyrical in classic style...this poem is really beautiful both in its construction and content...10+ please read my message to your box...
A fine lyrical write. May happiness be yours in 2009. Wishing you better very soon, my friend. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra
Good strong write..sorry to hear about your finger...hope it's soon better allowing you to post new poems...
yeah more you share happiness more you get it................ wonderful poem.........
A very artistic poem telling us that whatever little happiness comes our way can be doubled by sharing it with others. We usually share our 'pain' but seldom our 'pleasure' with our friends....10
This is a beautiful poem, Dr. Tulsi, filled with wonderful advice. You stated one of the universal truths of happness-sharing it makes it go farther and even more beautiful. I liked your charming poem very much. Carl.
Although the poem is seemingly simple, the message conveyed by it is profound. a simply superb poem!
This poem is worth being read by all - and being added to their 'favourite poems' lists.
i'm glad to have you back and i pray you continue to get better. this poem is excellent, so your comeback was great. a ten
Dr. Tulsi, you are so right, true happiness comes from sharing and being grateful. I like your style and rythmn in this poem.
This thankfully goes into MyPoemList.