Tuesday, September 2, 2014

Happenstance Things Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do not be hurt
By happenstance things;
A wreck on the roadway,
Late-coming trains.
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Patti Masterman
COMMENTS
Mark Heathcote 18 October 2014

Things you can fix Don't really matter. I think you meant (can’t) fix I much enjoyed your poem and its message for life. Nice one.

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Smoky Hoss 19 September 2014

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

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Johnathan Juarez 16 September 2014

i really like this short but sweet

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