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Your ability to paint a picture for my own mind's eye is wonderful. Across the many miles that separate our countries, I can feel close to your visionary portrait thru your writing. Nicely done! PEACE

Wonderful poem, Sir wonderful I like this line Students sinking in books

Enjoyable and observant read.

Enjoyed this read, kind of refreshing and easy yet interesting. Thanks for sharing Vijay.

Every human being born to this world has been destined to play a role. From birth to death, in different age capacities we all have predetermined roles to be played. As you have observed, those men and women are performing well. They have not deviated from the script (narrated by the god) . nice words. i like it. keep up the gud work.

a well conceived and composed poem. all in a days life should have been the title.i like the thought lines in writing this poem.well done(i have actually commented in this 4 days back.but nothing seems to have been recorded) thanks for sharing. surya.

A natural observation.The din and bustle in the hectic life well presented.Thanks.

A natural observation.The din and bustle in the hectic life well presented.Thanks.

You fold every moment in life, every scene front of the eyes to be here, so happening in your write...You are observer, being an observer is good thing we can learn many things around, and only sharp eyes can catch the whole picture...here you roll all like a video feature hahahaha..nice write Vijay :) I am sorry for late respond..write more okay? _Unwritten Soul

Wow! great poem Vijay...yep, Vipins..the last two lines are the soul of the poem..simple the best.

Really nice poem that shows the essence of life that is happening around us

Nice...A reality turned into an experience... If one looked upon all our journeys as experiences, then life would be so much nicer..

vow! great. in few lines you have explained a whole life around us. great observation and lines.thanks for sharing. surya

Wow, ye portraited a wonderful moving picture by your poem, , , , the last two line is the soul of this poem, , , excellent penning! ! !

beautiful slice of life...

A great poem, really liked it. A good write.

Enjoyable read. Really liked it.

A good poetic narrative of a journey by train that is picturesque of the journey of our life too.