Sunday, August 17, 2008

Haphazard Lives Comments

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We are inhabitants of a fast, high-octane world
Which promises every possible comfort to all and sundry
But the brave new age which it has unfurled
Is rapidly destroying every tangible moral boundary
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RONY PATRA
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Kesav Easwaran 17 August 2008

a serious write on declining values affecting visions of life...poem good, though descriptively expressive...the word 'detest' is okay and most fitting...10/10, Rony...

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Fahim Sayed 17 August 2008

Bro nice content and with a clear message... one correction ''The elderly detest this' should it be 'detect this'....i could rather suggest 'The elderly unfazed, lost in their prayers'.... Keep writing... Fahim

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