Saturday, February 9, 2008

Hans Andersen Comments

Rating: 4.8

The mysterious sharer of my dreams…
His magic wand he slightly waves.
Once I met Andersen in life –
The kind wizard, the king of tales.
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Greenwolfe 1962 02 July 2008

This was a wonderful story. A story with meaning and purpose. I wanted desperately to give it a 10 but I couldn't because there were a couple of rhymes in here that were very good. You may say then, what is wrong with that. Just as a rhyming poem needs a rhythm, a non rhyming verse needs the same. A good rhyme only reveals what has been missing. It is a light from a cigarette in the dark from those who wish to remain hidden. GW62

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Roland Bastien 19 April 2008

Well done Tsira - I enjoy reading your deep desire- a revelation...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 March 2008

the love in dream when wistful, well versed, i enjoyed the style of writing,10, thanks fopr sharing

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