Forty years I trudged
And had no answers;
A mind that was at sea
And heart unanchored.
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Hanratty is an invention. That does not mean that I don't share many of his emotions. Thanks to everyone for comments and praise. Glad this gave pleasure. Regards, Bep.
Hanratty is an invention, not autobiographical. That does not mean that some of the emotions expressed are not mine. Many thanks for praise and reactions from readers. Glad this gave you pleasure. - Bep.
Some fine lines in this. The sentiments expressed here reflect much of my own. Well written.
the poem of sadness... good personal poem.... it is full of emotions and has a good rhythm
if u ask my opinion, its a bit sad. i mean, really negative. HOWEVER the music of poetry has left me dumbfound. beautiful. keep it up Brian
Tragic, poignant, insightful. Could this be autobiographical?
This is awesome from start to finish. The feeling of lonely contemplation in the sea is so real I swear I hear seagulls...could be the squawking of the kids at the park I took my soon to though. Haha. ;)
I like the solitary feel, the slight breath of all human lonesome lingering in these words; very good.
OK I'll bite, who is Hanratty himself. Well written poem, perhaps a little enigmatic. Read mine - An Acutely Obtuse Pythagorean Lyric - Adeline
the sweetest poem as it is the saddest, very tragic and melancholic. i like the poem.
Hanratty is an invention. That does not mean that I don't share some of his emotions though his take on things is certainly darker than my own. Many thanks to all for comments and praise. Glad this gave pleasure. Best regards from Bep.