friends hanging out
drunk people driving
cars on high speed
big crash came by
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Sabrina You have described the accident very simply. Don't lose your courage Rgds Noor
I am sorry about you tragedy, writing poetry is the best therapy. Thank you for sharing your story. Buena suerte! Good luck! HL
It's painful.... Feeling not pain is simply very painful, but how easily you have described it.
A very touching piece. I cannot imagine this. Therefore, I hesitate to speak. The poet, has spoken for me. GW62
Hope you are doing fine. You wrote this poem about 5 and a half years ago. I do not know how your condition is now, but your poem saddened me so much that I thought I would inquire from you about your present condition. The title is apt, the poem is truth, hence a beauty.