These naughty oldies
Have no shame to hide
Why they think it is pride
When one leg in grave and another shaking
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Incisive write. An astute observation on elderly behavior
very well penned insight poem, well done for this beautiful poetic masterpiece. I would say even they are old but may be still feeling young inside their hearts! 5 stars
Mind is hollow and heart missing some bite. And still they want to the nectar from beautiful flowers.
A profound and insightful bit of verse nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Mind is hollow and heart missing some bite. And still they want to the nectar from beautiful flowers. facts of life and experience..... very well written symbolically. tony
When one leg in grave and another shaking Mind is hollow and heart missing some bite. And still they want to the nectar from beautiful flowers. Symbolic, and a very fine presentation and imagination. thank you dear poetess. tony
You have exposed the peculiarity of the societal situations in this poem: it is time to cease absorbing the energy of the young!
Loved it, though I should be counted among "the oldies"…