Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Hanging Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am fourteen
and my skin has betrayed me
the boy I cannot live without
still sucks his thumb
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Gabriella Grace
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Romeo Della Valle 04 April 2012

This is a typical dilemma among young people in the process of growing up! This fact in your case is beautifully described in this well penned and poignant write! 10+++ WELCOME to the Poetry World! Gabriella! Your poetic talent is so obvious and you should keep it up in order to enhance your writing skills! Thank you for sharing! It is a great pleasure to read and enjoy writes like yours! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Nikki Garland 30 July 2022

This is actually a poem by the Black writer, Audre Lorde.

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