Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Hang Up The Phone Comments

Rating: 2.7

hang up the phone...
let the voices in my head die down.
outside it's raining in layers,
and the cat curls against the steps.
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Eric Cockrell
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Dave Walker 19 September 2012

A fantastic poem, sometimes it's hard to know who we are. the powers that be change the world so much we forget what and who we are.

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Beth Johnson 18 September 2012

that was good.I liked it.I liked I'm alone with my though and turmoil.I can relate to this.Nice job! beth fairy77

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Elena Sandu 18 September 2012

who and what are we, if not human? why breathe if we cannot feel? Depth of despair is soften by the storm. The feet may run from sadness far away, the rain may have washed soul back to universal feel of love again. Or so I pray...Great poem, harsh questions, very real...

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