Hang On! Comments

seema u have a very nice poem there in the style of the subdued femme of the subcontinent... strongly emotive and great message... check out my...cherchez la femme...when ever time permits cheers

It is very true that in our Indian society the women folks have to endure a lot! They form the backbone of the family and also provide the courage to others - 'to hang on', in times of crisis! 10+ -Raj Nandy

'...the agonizing sleep On the bed of arrows, their tips Will wane by abrasion of your bones And there will be no more pain During the long rest....please endure this! ' Good poetry there Seema...tone subdued but emotions strong and rich...thanks...10

Very True, Seema! So, please do endure....... and feel the choicest blessings being showered upon you from the skies. God Bless! ! !