Sunday, September 20, 2009

Handwriting - Fear Comments

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I love the innocent look on their faces when he comes
don't try to cheat because if you do, after you he will run
just take me instead of him he was my dearest teacher
don't lay on your bed he likes to hunt his preys there
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Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2009

love the innocent look on their faces when he comes don't try to cheat because if you do, after you he will run just take me instead of him he was my dearest teacher don't lay on your bed he likes to hunt his preys there...beautiful poem wtih lovely feeling for teasher..goodpiece of writing. i liked it....10 read mine no, tacher please...school..hen laid an eggs

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