Friday, December 14, 2007

Handsome (Acrostic) Comments

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H e embodies all that I wish embodied
A nd stays true to his word, as few men do
N ot once do I consider him party to the lot
D oes his love for pride and honour not shine through?
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Samah Khan
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Sonny Rainshine 14 December 2007

This poem has a pleasing precison and rhythm. Each line is well-crafted and flows into the next one with ease. The key acrostic fits well with the theme and shape of the poem and never seems forced. Nice work.

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