Saturday, April 28, 2018

Hands Stretched Out To Heaven Comments

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Hands stretched out to heaven besieged
To God or a damned deity?
In the name of capitalism communism socialism
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

Rising from the dormant selves enslaving us Finding the freedom from within slavery As oceans of inspiration and purity cleanse us Giving up the ghost and revitalizing once again............intensive expression. A beautiful poem shared startlingly. Thanks for sharing.10

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Richard Wlodarski 29 April 2018

Kumarmani, I had just finished reworking this poem. And what a huge difference from the original! This last stanza I was particularly proud of. Thank you for highlighting it. And for your very positive response.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

Rising from the dormant selves enslaving us Finding the freedom from within slavery As oceans of inspiration and purity cleanse us Giving up the ghost and revitalizing once again............intensive expressiin. A beautiful poem shared startlingly. Thanks for sharing.10

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