Hands Stretched Out To Heaven Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Hands Stretched Out To Heaven

Rating: 5.0


Hands stretched out to heaven besieged
To God or a damned deity?
In the name of capitalism communism socialism

Living in the land of make-believe dying for humanity
We are slaves of robots stripping us of our mortality
Waking up to lies within our truths
Liberating ourselves from dying dreams
Crashing waves of creativity cleanse
As we flow into the oneness of Soul

Hands stretched out to heaven within Spirit
To a oneness with all humanity
In the name of God within us all
Living in the dying ingenuity

Rising from the dormant selves enslaving us
Finding the freedom from within slavery
As oceans of inspiration and purity cleanse us
Giving up the ghost and revitalizing once again

Saturday, April 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,genius,god,heaven,rebirth,spirit,spirituality,technology
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

Rising from the dormant selves enslaving us Finding the freedom from within slavery As oceans of inspiration and purity cleanse us Giving up the ghost and revitalizing once again............intensive expression. A beautiful poem shared startlingly. Thanks for sharing.10

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Richard Wlodarski 29 April 2018

Kumarmani, I had just finished reworking this poem. And what a huge difference from the original! This last stanza I was particularly proud of. Thank you for highlighting it. And for your very positive response.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

Rising from the dormant selves enslaving us Finding the freedom from within slavery As oceans of inspiration and purity cleanse us Giving up the ghost and revitalizing once again............intensive expressiin. A beautiful poem shared startlingly. Thanks for sharing.10

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