Saturday, July 14, 2012

Hands On A Clock Comments

Rating: 5.0

If we stop
the hands on a clock
does time stand still
in our minds
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Dave Alan Walker
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Godfrey Morris 27 July 2012

Time is the master of all things. Lovely thoughts expressed.

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Shai Cherry 23 July 2012

That poem makes a very good point.....

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Heather Wilson 21 July 2012

I often wish time would stand still for me, just for a little while, I enjoyed this thought,

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Hans Vr 18 July 2012

Deep Question. Very poetic. Nice poem

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Smoky Hoss 16 July 2012

Wonderful writing Dave; It's rather like the question of when we awake from a dream, do the people we were dreaming of wake up somewhere, also? What if one day, somewhere, the world awakes, and realizes that time was merely a dream, now finished? Not only would we all survive, I beleive, we'd be far better off... forever, for without time, there is no end. Very thoughtful poem.

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Valerie Dohren 14 July 2012

The solar system marks time so I guess it would not stop without clocks - would it stop if man ceased to exist?

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Saadat Tahir 14 July 2012

a very Socratic issue... :) raises potentially huge questions, a pointer to action stations... a kind off rallying call...nicely done cheers

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Eric Cockrell 14 July 2012

i often think time is an illusion....

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 July 2012

Good question and it depends upon what type of need that we have to look for the time. For the doctors, programmers and other few critical fields time is more important.. Good poem to think!

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Captain Cur 14 July 2012

The eternal now! Good poem! Philosophical and thought provoking!

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