Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Hands Of The Gratefull Gravedigger Comments

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Weary indeed are hands such as these from the prick of piney wood slivers
ley split earthy seems to place inert things
that these hands do daily deliver
They need not of rest and instead try their best
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Shakil Ahmed 01 December 2015

Thankful for life with its toil and strife Are the hands of the grateful gravedigger nice ending, the poem is beautiful, thanks

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Travis Jones 01 December 2015

i dont like that i used these, that, they, and the all in one poem. kind of repetitive but i dident want to fiddle with it becouse i liked the meter if that makes any since.

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