Sunday, November 29, 2009

Hands Of Sin Comments

Rating: 5.0

a flame dances upon the candle
dances within the black fumes
the candle melts in years alone
within the dark and dies for all
...
Read full text

Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)
COMMENTS
Lady Grace 11 December 2009

faithful men never fall..maybe...but there are times even great men fall....the piece shows heroism, patriotism, it shows love too...nicely done..

0 0 Reply
Obinna Eruchie 11 December 2009

This is such a deep lovely poem.

0 0 Reply
The Lost.. 30 November 2009

faithful men never fall, but sometimes they hurt alot.. well done: d

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success