Wednesday, April 11, 2018

Hands Across The Sea Comments

Rating: 2.8

Hands across the Sea

It started during war time
when the world had gone quite mad
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Bipasha D 22 April 2018

Lovely theme... I liked the rhyme and rhythm of the poem too.

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Bharati Nayak 17 April 2018

Instead of fighting each other join our hands across the sea and fight to save each other In perfect harmony. - - - - - Such a beautiful thought ! ! Let us join hands to make the world a better place.

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Carl Roussell 12 April 2018

Good message in this poem, and I really like the last stanza.

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The peaceful one 11 April 2018

This prayer is the need of our times

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