Monday, May 29, 2017

Hands Comments

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First Love's Touch,
mutual gathering was only through them,
our Hands.
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Lonnie Hicks
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Jefferson Carter 29 May 2017

Lonnie, some nice images here but the poem is over-written in places (especially stanzas 3 and 14) . Maybe simplify the diction and read out loud and revise for sound? If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC

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Lonnie Hicks

Lonnie Hicks

Chicago Ill
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Lonnie Hicks
Chicago Ill
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