Thursday, February 2, 2006

Hands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hands, expressive hands;
The gold bands around your wrists
Make beautiful hands.
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Melvina Germain 07 January 2008

Well the truth is we can love without hands but I love your depiction of what hands can do. Melvina

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Ruby Root 01 August 2006

Great Poem, Very sensual, take care.

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Lesa K 05 July 2006

Very well done! You have quite a way with words. : -)

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Ernest Mayer 12 May 2006

what beautiful poem. please make an e-book of ALL of your poems; more than a few would definitely appreciate it.

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Anna Cellmer 01 May 2006

Very nice poem which makes bright smile on my face :)

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trisha evensen 19 April 2006

this is a nice poem Trisha

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Anteneh Mekuria 29 March 2006

hands are always hands cuz they are made by the hands of God, good work i will read the others soon

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Charles Garcia 26 February 2006

Without hands there would be no memories brings back my youth. gives me a challenge to write a poem on hands as I was an expert in my younger days. Ha! big 10 for you. will read your work Charles Garcia

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William Jackson 11 February 2006

Sensuous and thought provoking.

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Evie Bryce 09 February 2006

pretty the repitition was done well

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

I agree with Charles' Wax's comment. This a beautiful, emotive love poem written from an angle we rarely pay enough attention to. Congratulations!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 February 2006

Wonderful and expressive. So much we take for granted. Without 'Hands' would we be just as sensitive to touch? Hmmm... L

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Charles Chaim Wax 02 February 2006

a gorgeous love poem the image seeping into the mind and holding it gently good work

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