Thursday, April 30, 2009

Handling The Pain Comments

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Stand near the light; don't walk towards the door
I'm myself, quite myself
Though quiet inside, I don't know.
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Rani Turton
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Kevin Wells 06 May 2009

Evocative and passionate. A great use of word-power throughout and true observations eloquently expressed.

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Raj Nandy 06 May 2009

A moving poem Madam! Your last two lines are true, give it wings and let it fly through! 10+ =Raj Nandy

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Fay Slimm 30 April 2009

Poetry is a great inner cleanser Rani and you bring this to our attention so discreetly in this fine piece - yes the pain needs to be given the freedom the fly itself - good work and thank you.....10 + ++ from Fay...

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