Saturday, June 6, 2015

Handle Me Comments

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Like a glass ballerina
High up on a shelf
I call down to you,
“Handle me! ”
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 02 August 2020

well, i read this one again before i saw i had commented on it previously and am struck again by the deep earnestness, the fierce wanting in it. -glen

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Glen Kappy 07 June 2018

As in a couple of other poems of yours, Suzanne, I like the frank wanting expressed here. One phrase I puzzle over—toxic treasure? Revisiting this poem, is toxic a descriptor you might change? -Glen

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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