Sunday, June 3, 2012

Handed Down Quietly Comments

Rating: 5.0

I listen to a song, cleaning a room
my granma says this song sounds good

she makes Sunday lunch
I say this tastes good
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Unwritten Soul 04 June 2012

I feel so nice and happy reading this story, simple buy it tells all in details, the connection of sweet between grandma and you well seen here, it so natural and for your poem it was your old style..wabi sabi style which provides skeleton of story and let readers to imagine the rest shape...love it! and Miso soup yum yum_Unwritten Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 03 June 2012

It is quite easier to live the inherited cultured life than the displaced rebellious life... well written! !

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