Friday, April 8, 2022

Hand In Hand Comments

Rating: 4.5

The church bells are ringing,
We're early to rise,
There's a bright sun this morning,
It shines in my eyes,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2022

A great romantic song dear poetess... loved it

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T.R. James Bray 08 April 2022

Well done, rhyme scheme is beautifully chosen to create the narrative.

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Jayne Davies 08 April 2022

Thank you for your comment! Much appreciated x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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