Sunday, June 26, 2011

Hand In Hand Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the sun sets
Casting our shadow
Since the day we were one,
I've lost my sorrow
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Pierre Pabstel
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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