You took my hand
I gave my hand to you
You clasped my hand
It lay snug within yours.
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self-shocking experience....... even i had the same in my life...........
so very sweet and heart warming! ! ! ....now i feel like saying I GET YOUR POINT LOVE YOU WERE HOLDING SOMEONE'S HAND no I am not a mean person it was just very repetative.... well done thanks 4 that! ! ! Chris x
This is a lovely and heart-touching write, Angelina, and expresses total and complete love very well. You fine poem vividly illustrates the power of touch so well in this brilliant poem. Carl.