Monday, October 19, 2009

Hampered Together Comments

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Rust coats the wheels
beyond appeals;
our halting grind
shall carve behind
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John Weber
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Patti Masterman 19 October 2009

I really enjoyed this. I love the second stanza especially; 'We've laid to waste by slack and haste all blessings grown once called our own..'. Sometimes lines in poems read like an incantation, and I think we like to repeat it in our comment; just to see if the same magic will work for us..(smile)

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