Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Hamesha Yaad Rakhti Hun! Comments

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Mera her roz
ik taaza tajurba le k aata he
naya sooraj
nai kirnen
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Shahzia Batool
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Muhammad Ali 07 January 2014

: -) . sweet poem. khud sy mil hi nhn paen gy, tb kahaan hon gy! tujhy jo bhool gaey, phir to hm bhi naan hon gy.

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Deepak Sawhney 04 August 2013

Friends...in the inanities you have forgotten what the poetess wishes to say. Please re-read the last 4 lines & then maybe you'll understand. Bahut khub.

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Deepak Sawhney 04 August 2013

I think... very beautifully expressed Shahzia. Kambakht yaadein hi to hain jo bhoolne ko majboor karti hain. Bahut accha likha.

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Ramesh Rai 31 July 2013

a nice thoughts so responsible you are to all friends plants and birds and creatures n even you have smile you always mind. a good broad n brilliant write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 31 July 2013

naya sooraj nai kirnen nai umeed laata he Sun is new every day. You always remember. Nice. Please read my poem 'What's New? ' when you have time. Thank you.

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