Sunday, June 25, 2023

Hamburger Cheek....[ The Perils Teeth Pose; Short; Limerick ] Comments

Rating: 4.5

At times my teeth bite more than my meal,
and then those around me may hear a squeal **.
I 'make' hamburger meat...
from tongue, lips, or cheek.
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Bri Edwards
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Sheeya Hacks 26 June 2023

Ha ha ha take care of your teeth don't let is free like bull in the ring. Liked it. Five *****

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

Thanks, Sheeya, But I think you 'mean': 'don't let them (referring to my teeth) be free..' What? ! Only 5 stars. Hey, I PAYED YOU the ten dollars to comment. : ( bri

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

merci, my friend

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Kim Barney 25 June 2023

I have done the same thing quite a few times, and it IS painful!

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

That's ok, ...as long as the 'cheek' you bite is NOT mine! Sorry, Kim. I shouldn't be so cheeky. : (

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Bri Edwards 25 June 2023

Go ahead, be the 'first one'...oops! .....make that 'the second one' to 'comment on this poem'. Personally, and I'm NOT BIASED DUE TO MY RELATIONSHIP WITH THE POET, this poem is FANTASTIC! ! : ) bri

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