Saturday, May 29, 2021

Hamada Desert Comments

Rating: 4.7

In this part of the world the land is dry
The lack of rainfall makes you go insane,
The mountain tops rise high into the sky
And the gray clouds attack the ridge in vain.
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Bri Edwards 20 October 2022

This is a very well written poem, but you must be pulling our legs. The blade of grass (and oasis) must have been a mirages or hallucinations. . bri : )

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 May 2021

The poet shows keen observation powers and immense poetic talent. The rhyme scheme is enjoyable. Loved the poem. Full score

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Kostas Lagos 29 May 2021

The desert. So wild yet so beautiful. Excellent poem

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