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I am always cautious around love poems because they are so very difficult to do well, but I think you have done a good job here. I love how the moon and the lover are addressed as one, and I really love the opening abd closing lines. Well done.

what a wonderful poem Lori.. so romantic! I'm glad that the halves meet.. :) HBH

I love the reconnection Lori, it very comforting. Nice poem. Sincerely Ernestine

Everyone likes a different line, and there are many good ones to like. Mine is, 'All things familiar feel foreign and far.' Keep those couplets rolling along.

I loved the line philandering moon. Good write.

Very romantic, Lori... I especially love the lines, 'The phone rings and your voice instantly reconnects the halves...' Nice. Many hugs, CJ