Thursday, January 31, 2019

Hallucinations Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the still night air
With no hope or flair,
I imagine your shadow
Long and narrow
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Sandra Feldman
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C F 01 February 2019

You write with eloquence with just the right image details and a mix of both the sensual and the ethereal... even while you are writing about heartache, your tone is still uplifting; if I write about sadness, it just makes me sad. Sometimes I wish I can write occasionally in your style rather than the compact, austere, often bleak form that I'm used to. Thank you for sharing your poem.

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