Hallucination Comments

1] the warmest in God`s nation 2] two swords of her`s are not sinners / they sit away like in british dinners I quote these lines just to show the difference of this poet. It seems very much anti-poetic, but its temperament fits with contemporary style of thoughts. Hallucination is nothing anew to poets, its expression is also very conventional, but my prior experience of reading him....the spirit of creating above lines makes him different from others.............10/10 Regards, pranab

Awesome and juvenile.....10

Wow this is very very, well done. It's a ten in my book.

very nice poem friend...10

simply enchanting love from afar

so sweet, simple, breathtaking

Aww this one is very sweet very sweet I love it! its really sweet and kind how you explain her

Attraction, makes the blood rush, exhilarating. Very nice poem I like the rhyme.10

wwoooww its good honestly i love it i love the words you use i love the rhyme its an awesome peice of work

a poem befitting ur youthful spirit!

Woah It's soo Warm and Sweet and i love how you rhymed the words Well done

Amazing poem..i like the way you made the words at the end rhyme in every four sentences.

this is such a nice piece, especially 2 stanza. hmm you are a great admirer, huh! ! keep it up, , man, ,

A poem on feelings of admiration, admiringly penned...your words and imagination are no miser any where through out this write...wonderfully composed...10

Thanks for sharing. I love poetry about girls with brown eyes! haha.

that is really nice i like it....

I like your description of this lady and you are fantastic in your words! Keep up your good work.I indeed enjoy this poem of yours!

beautiful, the rhyme is amazing. You're a great poet, thanks for sharing!

Very beautiful poems.... And this a phrase is really good : '....her brown eyes are innocent killers...' Г о л у б о г л а з о е , For my 10.... Best wishes, Tsira

Love and infatuation beautifully portrayed...a picture in words..thank you....