Hallucination Comments

It sounds great! Good flow and rhyming sceme.

your poem allows critical thought through a magical realm of everyday experience. you descriptions of what our speech lacks is so convincing even though your choice of words seem to generalize into multiple meanings you still keep a singular vision. keep working on it what u write is totally worth writing.

This is a great poem; the experience is so poetically desribed in wonderful verses.

you nailed it doctor dude- well done

sooo lovely..this poem is a real hallucination in poetry..

sound and light make the one sane/ 'tis a beautiful poem! ! ! !

A really great poem, like it.

You describe the imagery of evening very well. Interesting word choice :)

You bend the imagery in beautiful illusion, we cant deal what the reality stand behind the vapor scenery..we lost in this game where we ourself dont know where we at, sometimes we confused with lot of people saying which keep creating image that clashing with our mind..sometimes it came when negative swimming around our sanity and build something we didnt expect, subconsciousness we are..but we can escape because we end it sooner when sober recalled_Unwritten Soul