Hallows Eve Storm Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Hallows Eve Storm

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I was day dreaming. While you were sleeping.
I did pass by. While you were dreaming. I did
see the tears in your eyes. As my heart to cried.
Didn't know how to tell you while you were by my
side. Thought it'd come in time. Swear I never
thought we'd say goodbye. When I said forever,
meant, forever from whole, inside. My Heart didn't
lie. Always praying that, that star will keep you
safe. Somewhere. And be your guide. In all you do,
hope you know it too...You are so special...To life.....

Thursday, October 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dances on cars, photos, videos, times, Tri.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 13 October 2017

Hi Becca, The reader feels a very emotional outburst... but restraint is the facade of the poem. Beautifully done.. Congrats

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Rebecca Navarre 13 October 2017

Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishnan, For Such A Very Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Ever So Beautifully Deep! ! ! ! ! With Such Incredible Awe And Power Inside! ! ! ! ! Striking The Readers Hearts And Minds! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

During sleeping and day dreaming mind is automatically motivated. This displays the dreaming features. Always we are praying that, that star will keep you safe in stormy weather. We offer our prayers before God. He is special in love for us. He listens us at each moment.10

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Rebecca Navarre 13 October 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Your Ever So Beautiful And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Holds Such Beauty, Depth And Feel Inside, Your Soul Truly Shines! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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