Thursday, October 30, 2008

Halloween Wedding Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I was a ghost in love
Walking veiled in mystery
I would ask a ghostly dove
to take a message to thee
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Very hauntingly beautiful a ten from me.

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Hayli Harding 10 November 2008

I loved it. :) It was entertaining and funny.<3 Awesome writing, btw.

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Tia Maria 30 October 2008

I was of course drawn to this title & rather surprised there are not a hundred more curious readers... very creepy kind of proposal & most entertaining, well done : -)

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Lynda Robson 30 October 2008

A wonderful Halloween poem, the ghostly bride and groom pale as the moon, Very enjoyable read, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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