Friday, October 27, 2006

! Halloween Tale Comments

Rating: 3.3

Remember old Ichabod, last name of Crane
The gangly schoolmaster - some thought him insane
He went to a party on All Hallows' Eve
What happened that night is still hard to believe;
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Linda Ori
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 October 2008

Midnight...this is off-the-charts awesome work...Metre & Rhyme, as sweet as it comes....Short stories, in the future 4-U, perhaps? I get the 1st book of the 1st printing....AUTOGRAPHED! fjr

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Not a member No 4 25 January 2007

This is lore I'm pretty familiar with, but still you had me galloping like blazes to get over that burn before the dodgy heidless guy caught up with me. Good penmanship. Tension and tempo to match the dread beast's threat. (Just coincidence that I should read this on the 25th of January!) x jim

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Alison Cassidy 02 November 2006

A bold, stylish rendition of this blood-curdling story - brilliant! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx

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Esther Leclerc 31 October 2006

Linda, what a wonderful poem! The narrative of the well-known tale is made new and vibrant through your verse. Happy Halloween to you! Esther : ]

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 October 2006

AHHHH, LAYDEE MIDNIGHT, YIR TAKIN' ME LUSTRE UFF ITS PAPYRA.... Such o' finer rendition, th'n me chronicles... as they'r hav'n a wee taste uv th' tear stain...Rustin up me pen 'n aul...'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{f j r}

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