Friday, August 31, 2018

Halloween Poem—my Friend Dave Comments

Rating: 5.0

Well, I went for a walk last Halloween
on the scariest night you've ever seen.
and to prove to myself I was not afraid
I went to a place where the dead are laid:
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John Beaton
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Crayon Poet 04 September 2018

Thanks for the late-night smile, poet :)

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John Beaton 04 September 2018

Thanks, Crayon Poet. It's always good to go to sleep with a smile.

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Crayon Poet 05 September 2018

You're welcome, John, and I do agree!

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Richard Wlodarski 03 September 2018

That was a lot of fun! You had me laughing. And guessing. And I don't know what. Very enjoyable write and read. But with all due respect to Rose Marie, you might have a little competition with my poem Halloween Night At The Cemetery. However, you don't need to worry, John because Dave will come after me and I'll just laugh it off!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 August 2018

What a wonderful and funny poem. Very entertaining. The recurring word: clickety...enhanced the beauty of this write. This should be the poem of the day on Halloween Day. Superbly penned. Enjoyed reading it.10++++++××÷

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John Beaton 01 September 2018

Thanks, Rose Marie. It's been fun to perform for audiences that include lots of kids. I put up a sound file but I guess it takes a little while to pass the approval process before it appears.

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