Thursday, October 30, 2008

Halloween Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon looms above in a shroud of cloud.
Amber lights flicker in the gloom.
Faces emerge from the darkness.
A wolf howls and a witch rides her broom.
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Stephanie Dower
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Pensive Phoenix 16 March 2009

I really liked your description and imagery in this poem. It made the atmosphere in the poem very palpable. Good write.

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Stephanie Moore 25 January 2009

I really like the felling it give off like I am standing in the image! !

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Michael Gale 11 November 2008

Yes-Ghouls can spread mischief, but only when tempted by an innocent bystander. Loved it-great poem. I hadda giv'ver a tenner. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Marilyn Lott 30 October 2008

Creepy and fun just like it should be - good job! A '10! ' Keep writing and sharing with us. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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