Halloween Hollow Man Comments

I went to a house to see HALLOWEEN AN OLD LADY GOT OFF HER CHARIOT AND QUERIED IS HE DEAD YET HAPPY HOLLOW WEEN

this poem sent chills down my back. Very frightening

now this a difficult thing to do in very few words and syllables but you accomplished it! ! ! you gave me chills with a senyru! ! ! ! ! ! excellent! ! ! ! of course! ! ! ! ! and a perfect title to set the tone! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++s

Ha ha as long it's not a grizzly bear as it sounds and seems in your funtastic poem then u may open the door. A fun Halloween poem. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your inking again pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

Hi friend. Pray there is no one there. But feel the fear both ways. Sometimes life is just fear. Nice poem

Well, no one but your spouse sleeping down the hallway, in the bedroom! ! ! bri (:

I had the occasion to witness this festival of fun and gaiety. I was in Florida, at my sister's house this time during Halloween and could watch batches of children and even grown ups in eerie guises of witches, ghosts and ghouls coming and knocking at the door and the houses decorated with carved pumpkins and other decorations. It was indeed a memorable experience! You have encapsulated the true spirit of Halloween in a few words!

Halloween.....i still have not figured it out whether it is a festival of fun. Well Mj, through this Senryu, i have the answer. I would not like to open the door. Not to hear the grunts and breaths swell.........beautifully the point is made. Thank you dear Poet.......10

Funny and entertaining! But also, SCARY! Great Senryu!

nice what ever 'tis is HALLOWEEEEEN IZ

What a wonderful poem! Beautifully penned halloween Senryu. Appreciated.

Hahahahahaha, thats funny and sweet if you see some candies missing then have no worry, it could be some sweetie visitors :)

nice Halloween senryu