Sunday, February 18, 2018

Hallelujah Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the Showers of Tears of Rain,
I felt each drop piercinglike my own
Guilt capturing its moments.
In the Showers of Tears of Rain,
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Takbeer Salati
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 February 2018

A very nice poem with superb refrain, lyrical and poetic. Real fine to read, . Thumbs up. Pleez do review /comment my latest poem too, titled, a song for lunar lovers

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Takbeer Salati 19 February 2018

Thank You Zaynab. It would be my pleasure :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 February 2018

Showers of Tears Guilt capturing rose water Purifying my soul Not giving me a chance to commit sin Once more A fine poem of love, guilt, padon, remorse and a prayer to. Thank u Very much dear poet. Love this poem. tony

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Takbeer Salati 19 February 2018

Thank You so much Tony.

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