Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Hall Of Obscurity Comments

Rating: 3.0

Across the hall i did stand and stare,
at the thing i could have sworn was there,
my feet seemed glued to the freezing floor,
i could not turn to face the door,
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Pha Thanh Gian 17 April 2008

good work again, i believe you have a lot of potentials...

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Cristian Dolon 16 April 2008

Anyone that gives this poem lower then 10... Will be committing a sin! This is one of the best I've read. It easily rivals my poem named 'Mysterious Guest'.

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