Across the hall i did stand and stare,
at the thing i could have sworn was there,
my feet seemed glued to the freezing floor,
i could not turn to face the door,
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Anyone that gives this poem lower then 10... Will be committing a sin! This is one of the best I've read. It easily rivals my poem named 'Mysterious Guest'.
good work again, i believe you have a lot of potentials...