Half Written Poem Comments

o the life the sense of life the mind of life wanna a green evergreen tour through the whole.........///

Yes, a poem never gets fully writ, and that is life. A lovely poem feelingly writ, and my visit was worth its while.

Bharati, this poem affirms my conviction that you are a natural poet. With ease, it seems, you express an intimacy with the natural world that is both accessible and lyrical. -Glen

My soul want to fly! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Fertile with the feelings of heart, and that of imagination, ending with a bit of philosophy, a very well-writ piece.

Simply marvelous, dear Ma'am Bharati........................10+++++++++++++

Many years hav epassed giving us many more memories. We have gathered feelings to share. Green leaves mingle with mind and we mingle with green heaven. This poem has rich greenness and beauty of expression. This is an excellent poem shared here with beauty and benovelence. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem...10