Half Wife Comments
Like the half-moon in the night sky
Among so many twinkling stars
You are with me and my side
Like never ending problems
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Great metaphor and it made me smile...great work Asim, so many poems I read today, Thanks.
Like the half glass of wine waiting for two ice cubes, my life is waiting to embrace you..Lovely simile. Another beautiful write from your pen. Full marks to you.
Two halves make one and in that there is the ultimate satisfaction of union in love.. A beautiful poem Asim. Thanks for sharing :)
Intezaar aur abhi, aur abhi, aur abhi..... Chand ko poora hone ke liye ik safar tay karna padta hai..Abhi to safar main ho... Chand zaroor apni urooj par hoga. khoobsurat nazm.10.
Never ending problems with half-wife is wonderfully expressed in this wisely humorous poem. Finely drafted and shared.10
Half plus half makes one....one life..complete life....nice poem...thank u for sharing :)
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7/30/2025 5:50:18 PM # 1.0.0
Fantastic poem You are half because I am the other half Yet life is not full As expected