Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Half Way To Paradise? Comments

Rating: 3.9

This poem is dedicated to Olfa Drid to encourage her in her very exciting and precious search for spiritual truth.

Life makes such high demands on me each day;
Demands of social intercourse, demands of physical existence,
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 September 2009

deep thoughts highlights a philosophical pathway. this piece evinces -> the progress of our life, ->the mysteries of simple things which live with us for life, ->the details of the most complicated system (Human Being) wise question throughout the poem.

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

wow....magestic composition....profound one...with tons of wisdom and take out here, , ,10

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 13 August 2009

A highly contemplative and philosophical poem, full of spirituality, social responsibility, managing daily routine etc., and the final goal of all this course to attain a glimpse of divinity is very well expressed. The spiritual energy comes from interaction of without (can be cosmic force) and within (energy due to breathing process, food and water taken etc.,) A fine analysis and summation of life and suggestions about goals of life. Enjoyed the poem much.

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John Knight

John Knight

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