Half Time Dady Comments
last time I saw you sober
you were on strong knees, taking me to school
hours passed and i found you ill
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i like your poem, though i'm not sure that i'm interpreting the last stanza correctly. are you saying dady is dead but 'working' for your benefit from 'Heaven'? here 'we' spell this alternate name for father........daddy/Daddy, shortened to dad/Dad. welcome to PH. let me look at another of your poems. bri ;)
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7/20/2025 2:26:52 PM # 1.0.0
A sensitive approach to daddy's reminiscence.nicely written