Half Past A Headache Comments

This has the strong feel of reality flowing all through it; good writing.

Great poem Martin. Kinda jogs along nicely.

I love it. Images I can touch, can smell.

A lovely, rhyming, rhythmic verse here that tell the story of the drinking man and woman and even though I don't, I get the picture loud and clear

Wow, I just read this again and it's a marvel of craftmanship..The unusual rhyme scheme is the icing on this one..does it justice in every way. ;) Sorta made me wish I was the barfly type, just so I could soak up some of that atmosphere!

beatifully written.. a bar soaked in dreams... does alcohol make one dream or drown it in tears.. great read.

You portray images as clear as crystal, I'm very impressed with this poem

You've captured the unexpected beauty of things in life that shouldn't be; without ever asking why, and that is something this universe badly needed, so thank you. For this.

You set a pace and a tempo in this poem that goes just perfectly with the theme, the rhymes, with everything! Really nice! !

Pour me a Guinness and paint me a smile I'm sitting here reading your poetry awhile.

I love the structure of this, and the observational tone in which you write it. You paint a vivid picture.