Half Opened Doors By Olorunkemi Kareem. Poem by Olorunkemi Kareem

Half Opened Doors By Olorunkemi Kareem.

Rating: 5.0


I smile in rooms where I'm barely seen,
A whisper behind every louder scene.
The friend they remember when no one's around,
A voice they reach for when theirs makes no sound.

I give them my heart like a gentle song,
They hum for a moment, then move along.
I reach with love, they take what they need,
And leave me to wrestle with roots of a seed.

I'm the second choice, the almost-there,
The ‘maybe later, ' the cross to bear.
I love too loud in a world that's numb,
I wait for a welcome that never comes.

But maybe… just maybe…
It's time I stop knocking on half-opened doors,
And start keeping the love that I give to be yours.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Setting: A dim, quiet hallway filled with multiple old wooden doors, each one slightly ajar but with no light or people behind them — symbolizing the " almosts, " the emotional half-investments, and unfulfilled connections. Foreground: A figure standing alone, facing one of the half-open doors. The figure is slightly hunched, holding a glowing red heart in their hands — tender and vulnerable. Lighting: Soft shadows dominate the hallway, but a warm light starts to shine behind the figure, hinting at new beginnings, as if they've just turned away from the doors and are walking toward self-love. Mood: Melancholy, reflective, yet gently empowering — a turning point.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 August 2025

A meaningful well expressed poem. Very touching and inspiring.

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