Half Naked Without A Hat Comments

Very nice choice of matching hats with shirts.More humorous is he wears hats till it disintegrates.Iam happy that ultimately he married your beautiful sister.

Very nice choice of

Made me laugh good job

I haven't read a funnier poem.

In a witty way, you've shown that thieves can be appealing. It's a great mastery to steal someone with something and then he's happy after that. You do not see my smile.

The half naked boy after missing his cap who once was loving your beautiful sister at tiny age became your sister in-law was unknown to you. This story is so moving and haunting in your pen. A beautiful poem.10

Just a wonderful write with the best ending possible.++10

An interesting humorous poem. The title of the poem is very apt.

An interesting poem Rose Marie. A beautiful narrative of your brother -in laws fondness for hats. Wonderfully crafted.10

He stole a kiss from her/But he got no luck/Before he could land his lips on hers...fabulous expression Rose! It's my pleasure revisiting this amazing poem that depicts a different kind of lifestyle!

Such a fascinating story poem, glowing with heartwarming strings... enjoy reading it.

Hats off to Rose Marie for this poem!

Though you had hinted at a romance springing between your beautiful sister and the boy who always wore a hat, it was quite a surprise to learn at the end that their love culminated in marriage! Your brother in law seems to be an interesting guy with a large assortment of caps of all colors and kinds and who feels half naked without a cap on! Beautiful narration!

Great write. Interesting expression. I quote..... But he doesn't mind No, not at all Despite he felt half naked Without a hat Inside the church Specially on the most important day of his life When he married My beautiful sister.......... Thanks for sharing.

Sounds like you have a wise sister. It's not what's under the hat that is so important, but what is inside the heart. I hope he bought a nice hat for his new wife. Reminds us not to hurry love. I felt like I was there watching the scene unfold. Thank you dear poetess. 10

When he married my beautiful sister! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wonderful narration with wonderful expression...indeed an excellent poem gift to your sister and her husband... quite admirable Rose

Rose Marie, such lovely poem worthy of 10+++++++

Sometimes he spoils His Black Stallion He puts grains On the poor cowboy hat He bends And the horse will eat To its heart's content......beautiful expression! I will revisit this poem to have a technical analysis of stanzas and the structure of the poem.....10

Such an interesting poem on a brother-in-law, enjoyed it a lot.